I've kept the same animatic from 'The Pitch' on Monday, but added a short informative voice-over (which was advised) with the music lowered so you the audience can hear both parts. This will not be the final voice-over as it is my own voice and is just to show my idea of the narration as well as having the music to test how it works.
I think it's great that you did this, Megan - really useful test. I think you need a bit of an introduction - a part of the voice-over that introduces the topic somehow, as opposed to jumping us directly into the action. I think you also need to think about the contribution that some additional SFX would make in the sound mix - just some 'dispersal' sounds when the spores fly out and maybe a 'phasing hum' sound when the fertilisation takes place - so not realistic or real world sounds, but some augmentation to enrich the experience for the viewer.
ReplyDeleteOkay thanks Phil, will work on it! :)
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