Fantastic Voyage: First Scene Render Test - with Voiceover

Here's a test render I have, along with music and professional voice over! As it stands, there are still changes I want to make (more vibrant, less reflective, and get some of my own mark making on those surfaces if I can). But anyway, work in progress!

@Phil - Fantastic Voyage: Updated Pre-Viz

My last file you saw corrupted and so I had to do everything again. I think this is better than the original one anyway.

Fantastic Voyage: Maya Pre-Viz

Music Only Music and Narration This is what I have so far. Quite pleased with it but not sure about the camera movement in act three (where the new spores are released), maybe it is too frantic? And obviously if I am going to be having a voiceover, it will not be me (This is just an example for what it might be like). Feedback welcome :)